Thursday, June 2, 2011

Intro to Revision Piece

The original assignment was to show a result of our readings (primary) and observations (secondary), how can we argue that our findings are the greatest obstacles or challenges to developing a strong sense of self-identity? OR a result of our readings (primary) and observations (secondary), how can you argue that our findings are the greatest contributors to developing a strong sense of self-identity? We were to put in a context the demonstrated our thesis and to bring in an argument of why we thought of it that way. This is one of the papers that I really did not do well on at all. I want to think that I started out right, but I went my own way. This paper was a hard challenge for me to write. What I thought was a thesis was just that, a thought.

Society today unknowingly molds an individual’s identity and the individual may choose to expand on these influences and shape their identity to something different. Everything happens for a reason. This shapes you into the individual person you become. The person, who we become, is influenced by the people around us, our family, our friends, and our co-workers. They all shape us, whether it’s how we look, how we dress, or how we talk. Your identity can change by how you are treated throughout your life.

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